Organising Information and Ideas

OCR

GCSE

Proficiency in organising information and ideas requires the strategic manipulation of structural features to ensure coherence and cohesion in written responses. Candidates must demonstrate the ability to synthesise explicit and implicit data from diverse sources, selecting and sequencing evidence to support a specific focus. In production, marks are awarded for the effective use of paragraphing, discourse markers, and structural shifts that guide the reader through a logical or narrative progression. High-level responses are characterised by sophisticated control over textual architecture, enhancing the overall rhetorical or narrative impact.

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Organising Information and Ideas

What You Need to Demonstrate

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Award Level 5/6 for the use of integrated discourse markers that guide the reader seamlessly through complex arguments or narrative shifts, rather than clunky transitional phrases.
Credit the conscious manipulation of paragraph length to control pace, such as using single-sentence paragraphs to create tension or emphasis.
Reward cyclical structures in creative writing where the conclusion echoes the opening motif, demonstrating planned cohesion.
Differentiate between 'controlled' structure (Level 4) which organizes ideas logically, and 'sophisticated' structure (Level 6) which uses structural features to enhance meaning.
Award marks for the conscious use of sophisticated discourse markers to signpost shifts in time, place, or argument (AO5)
Credit the effective use of topic sentences that establish the focus of the paragraph immediately, ensuring internal cohesion (AO5)
Reward analysis that identifies how paragraph breaks in source texts isolate key information for dramatic or emphatic impact (AO2)
Assess the integration of dialogue within paragraphs, ensuring correct indentation and speaker separation to maintain clarity (AO6)

Marking Points

Key points examiners look for in your answers

Award Level 5/6 for the use of integrated discourse markers that guide the reader seamlessly through complex arguments or narrative shifts, rather than clunky transitional phrases.
Credit the conscious manipulation of paragraph length to control pace, such as using single-sentence paragraphs to create tension or emphasis.
Reward cyclical structures in creative writing where the conclusion echoes the opening motif, demonstrating planned cohesion.
Differentiate between 'controlled' structure (Level 4) which organizes ideas logically, and 'sophisticated' structure (Level 6) which uses structural features to enhance meaning.
Award marks for the conscious use of sophisticated discourse markers to signpost shifts in time, place, or argument (AO5)
Credit the effective use of topic sentences that establish the focus of the paragraph immediately, ensuring internal cohesion (AO5)
Reward analysis that identifies how paragraph breaks in source texts isolate key information for dramatic or emphatic impact (AO2)
Assess the integration of dialogue within paragraphs, ensuring correct indentation and speaker separation to maintain clarity (AO6)

Examiner Tips

Expert advice for maximising your marks

💡Plan the 'shape' of the response before writing; identify the climax in narratives or the pivot point in arguments to ensure a directed trajectory.
💡Use a 'drop-shift-zoom-out' structure for descriptions: drop into the scene, shift focus/perspective, then zoom out for a reflective conclusion.
💡Employ 'structural signposting' in non-fiction: use topic sentences that explicitly link back to the previous paragraph's concluding thought.
💡Reserve the final 5 minutes to check paragraph transitions; ensure the link between the end of one and the start of the next is logical and fluid.
💡Plan the 'trajectory' of the response; ensure the final paragraph links back to the opening to create a satisfying cyclical structure
💡When analysing structure (AO2), focus on the *shift* between paragraphs—ask what changes (focus, time, perspective) across the break
💡Use a 'drop-shift-zoom' approach in narrative writing to naturally dictate paragraph changes based on camera-angle movements
💡Proofread specifically for 'wall of text' errors; if a paragraph exceeds 10 lines, check for a natural break point to improve readability

Common Mistakes

Pitfalls to avoid in your exam answers

Relying on basic connective phrases (e.g., 'Firstly', 'Secondly', 'Then') which limits cohesion marks to Level 3.
Failing to paragraph dialogue correctly, causing confusion in speaker identification and disrupting the visual flow of the text.
Producing a 'list-like' structure in transactional writing that lacks a clear, developing line of argument.
Abrupt endings caused by poor time management, resulting in an incomplete structural arc and loss of coherence marks.
Relying on mechanical, formulaic transitions (e.g., 'Firstly', 'Secondly') rather than conceptual links between ideas
Producing 'tipping point' paragraphs where a new idea is introduced at the very end of a block rather than starting a new one
Treating structure analysis in reading as merely spotting a paragraph break without explaining its specific function or effect
Failing to use one-sentence paragraphs to create tension or emphasis in creative writing, resulting in a monotonous pace

Key Terminology

Essential terms to know

Reading skill: Synthesis and summary of explicit/implicit data

Reading skill: Structural analysis (shifts, focus, perspective)

Writing skill: Coherence and cohesion (discourse markers, paragraphing)

Writing skill: Narrative and transactional structuring

Reading skill: Synthesis and summary of explicit/implicit data

Reading skill: Structural analysis (shifts, focus, perspective)

Writing skill: Coherence and cohesion (discourse markers, paragraphing)

Writing skill: Narrative and transactional structuring

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