Sonnet 18 (William Shakespeare)

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    The speaker initiates a comparison between the Fair Youth and a summer's day, immediately establishing the Youth's superiority in terms of temperance and consistency. While summer is depicted as transient, subject to extreme weather ('rough winds') and inevitable decay, the speaker argues that the Youth's beauty possesses an enduring quality. The poem pivots at the volta to assert that the Youth's 'eternal summer' will be preserved not by nature, but by the poem itself. The concluding couplet resolves the argument by declaring that as long as humanity survives to read these lines, the Youth's essence remains immortalized within the verse.

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    • AO1: Candidates must articulate a clear, comparative thesis regarding the speaker's confidence in the power of poetry to immortalise the subject, contrasting this with the chosen comparison poem.
    • AO2: Credit analysis of the sonnet form (three quatrains, volta, couplet) as a vehicle for logical argument, and the use of iambic pentameter to mimic the heartbeat or constancy of love.
    • AO2: Award marks for deconstructing the extended metaphor of 'summer' as a limiting comparison, noting the specific connotations of 'rough winds' and the 'eye of heaven' (personification).
    • AO3: Responses must integrate understanding of the Renaissance context of patronage and the literary tradition of the 'eternalising metaphor', distinguishing the Fair Youth context from generic romantic address.

    Example Examiner Feedback

    Real feedback patterns examiners use when marking

    • "You have identified the metaphor correctly; now explain why Shakespeare chose 'summer' specifically to represent transience."
    • "Ensure your comparison is integrated. Use connective phrases like 'Conversely' or 'Similarly' to link Sonnet 18 to the second poem within the same paragraph."
    • "Your context regarding the Renaissance is valid, but you must link it to the text. How does the idea of 'patronage' explain the flattery in the final couplet?"
    • "Avoid asserting the rhyme scheme exists 'to make it flow'. Discuss how the strict structure mirrors the speaker's desire for order and permanence."

    Marking Points

    Key points examiners look for in your answers

    • AO1: Candidates must articulate a clear, comparative thesis regarding the speaker's confidence in the power of poetry to immortalise the subject, contrasting this with the chosen comparison poem.
    • AO2: Credit analysis of the sonnet form (three quatrains, volta, couplet) as a vehicle for logical argument, and the use of iambic pentameter to mimic the heartbeat or constancy of love.
    • AO2: Award marks for deconstructing the extended metaphor of 'summer' as a limiting comparison, noting the specific connotations of 'rough winds' and the 'eye of heaven' (personification).
    • AO3: Responses must integrate understanding of the Renaissance context of patronage and the literary tradition of the 'eternalising metaphor', distinguishing the Fair Youth context from generic romantic address.

    Examiner Tips

    Expert advice for maximising your marks

    • 💡Select a comparison poem that offers a distinct contrast in tone (e.g., the cynicism of 'The Sorrows of True Love' or the realism of 'Valentine') to facilitate sharper analysis.
    • 💡Allocate time strictly: 5 minutes planning, 40 minutes writing. Ensure the comparison is woven into every paragraph, not separated into halves.
    • 💡Memorise the 'volta' or turning point of your comparison poems; this is often the highest-scoring area for structural analysis.
    • 💡Use the 'Concept-Method-Effect' structure for every point: State the poet's idea, identify the technique, and explain the impact on the reader.

    Common Mistakes

    Pitfalls to avoid in your exam answers

    • Biographical fallacy: Asserting the poem is definitely about Shakespeare's wife (Anne Hathaway) rather than the Fair Youth or an abstract ideal.
    • Feature-spotting: Identifying 'iambic pentameter' or 'rhyme scheme' without explaining how the regularity reinforces the theme of constancy.
    • Neglecting the volta: Failing to analyse the shift in tone at 'But thy eternal summer shall not fade' as the pivot of the argument.
    • Imbalanced comparison: Treating the second poem as an afterthought rather than maintaining a sustained, integrated comparison throughout.

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