A Complaint (William Wordsworth)

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    The poem articulates a profound sense of loss following the estrangement of a close friend, widely interpreted as Samuel Taylor Coleridge. Wordsworth employs an extended metaphor of financial wealth to juxtapose the spiritual abundance of the past against the emotional poverty of the present. The speaker acknowledges that while a connection remains, it lacks the vitality and unconditional love of the former bond. Through a shift from nostalgic appreciation to resigned acceptance, the text explores the painful transition from intimacy to superficial acquaintance. The poem serves as a melancholic reflection on the fragility of human connection and the irrevocable nature of change.

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    What You Need to Demonstrate

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    • AO1: Articulate the speaker's melancholic realization of the irrevocable change in the relationship, distinguishing between the 'sparkling' past and the 'comfortless' present.
    • AO2: Analyse the extended metaphor of water; contrast the dynamic, public 'fountain' with the stagnant, private 'well' to represent the shift in affection.
    • AO3: Integrate understanding of Romantic sensibilities regarding intense personal emotion and the sanctity of friendship, potentially linking to the rift with Coleridge as a mechanism for the grief.
    • AO4: Sustain a critical comparison with a second poem (e.g., 'Neutral Tones' or 'When We Two Parted') focusing on the presentation of estrangement, memory, or the passage of time.

    Example Examiner Feedback

    Real feedback patterns examiners use when marking

    • "You have identified the metaphor, now evaluate how it shapes the reader's understanding of the speaker's grief."
    • "Ensure your comparison is sustained throughout the response, rather than dealing with the poems separately."
    • "Contextual points regarding Coleridge must be used to illuminate the poem's themes, not just stated as fact."
    • "Strengthen your analysis of the poem's structure; how does the rhythm reflect the speaker's agitation?"

    Marking Points

    Key points examiners look for in your answers

    • AO1: Articulate the speaker's melancholic realization of the irrevocable change in the relationship, distinguishing between the 'sparkling' past and the 'comfortless' present.
    • AO2: Analyse the extended metaphor of water; contrast the dynamic, public 'fountain' with the stagnant, private 'well' to represent the shift in affection.
    • AO3: Integrate understanding of Romantic sensibilities regarding intense personal emotion and the sanctity of friendship, potentially linking to the rift with Coleridge as a mechanism for the grief.
    • AO4: Sustain a critical comparison with a second poem (e.g., 'Neutral Tones' or 'When We Two Parted') focusing on the presentation of estrangement, memory, or the passage of time.

    Examiner Tips

    Expert advice for maximising your marks

    • 💡Allocate 5-10 minutes to plan the comparison points before writing; the second poem must be recalled from memory.
    • 💡Ensure the choice of the second poem allows for rich AO4 comparison; 'Neutral Tones' offers a strong contrast in tone (bitterness vs. melancholy).
    • 💡Focus analysis on the structural shift in the second stanza where the tense changes from past to present.
    • 💡Memorize key quotations from potential partner poems, as the anthology is closed book.

    Common Mistakes

    Pitfalls to avoid in your exam answers

    • Treating the poem as a trivial grievance rather than a profound lament on the loss of spiritual connection.
    • Identifying the 'fountain' and 'well' imagery without analysing the semantic implications of 'living' versus 'comfortless'.
    • Providing a biographical narrative of Wordsworth and Coleridge at the expense of textual analysis (AO3 error).
    • Imbalanced comparison; treating the second (unprinted) poem as an afterthought or lacking specific evidence for it.

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