Death Be Not Proud (John Donne)

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    The speaker initiates a direct, litigious confrontation with the personified figure of Death, challenging its perceived omnipotence through a series of logical paradoxes. By deploying the conventions of the metaphysical conceit, the persona argues that Death is merely a 'slave' to earthly powers and a temporary transition rather than a finality. The sonnet systematically dismantles the fear of dying by equating it to sleep and exposing its dependence on 'fate, chance, kings, and desperate men'. Ultimately, the text asserts the Christian doctrine of resurrection, culminating in the destruction of Death itself. This subversion of the traditional power dynamic transforms the terrifying spectre of mortality into a powerless agent of eternal life.

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    What You Need to Demonstrate

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    • AO1: Candidates must sustain a comparative argument regarding the speaker's defiance and the subversion of death's authority, linking to the second poem.
    • AO2: Analyse the effect of the direct apostrophe ('Death, be not proud') and the personification of Death as a 'slave' to fate.
    • AO2: Evaluate the structural impact of the volta and the shift from Petrarchan octave to a Shakespearean-style concluding couplet.
    • AO3: Integrate understanding of 17th-century Metaphysical conventions and the Christian doctrine of the Resurrection as the mechanism for death's defeat.

    Example Examiner Feedback

    Real feedback patterns examiners use when marking

    • "You have identified the personification of Death; now compare how this differs from the personification in the second poem."
    • "Ensure your context regarding Christian doctrine is used to explain *why* the speaker calls Death a 'slave'."
    • "Embed your quotations more fluidly to maintain the academic register of your argument."
    • "Your analysis of the final couplet is strong; extend this by evaluating the certainty of the rhyme scheme."

    Marking Points

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    • AO1: Candidates must sustain a comparative argument regarding the speaker's defiance and the subversion of death's authority, linking to the second poem.
    • AO2: Analyse the effect of the direct apostrophe ('Death, be not proud') and the personification of Death as a 'slave' to fate.
    • AO2: Evaluate the structural impact of the volta and the shift from Petrarchan octave to a Shakespearean-style concluding couplet.
    • AO3: Integrate understanding of 17th-century Metaphysical conventions and the Christian doctrine of the Resurrection as the mechanism for death's defeat.

    Examiner Tips

    Expert advice for maximising your marks

    • 💡Structure the essay conceptually (e.g., 'Power', 'Fear', 'Resolution') rather than analyzing Poem A then Poem B separately
    • 💡Allocate 5-10 minutes for planning to ensure the comparison is integrated, not an afterthought
    • 💡Memorize the final couplet ('And death shall be no more; Death, thou shalt die') as it encapsulates the central paradox
    • 💡Use the 'slave to fate, chance, kings, and desperate men' line to contrast with poems depicting death as omnipotent

    Common Mistakes

    Pitfalls to avoid in your exam answers

    • Treating the poem as a secular denial of death rather than a religious paradox
    • Identifying the sonnet form without explaining how the structure aids the syllogistic argument
    • Bolting on biographical facts about Donne's priesthood without linking to the poem's theology
    • Failing to maintain a balanced comparison with the second poem throughout the response

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