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    Communicating information and ideas (01)

    This topic tests your ability to read closely, analyse language and structure, and produce highly effective original writing. You will be assessed on how well you understand writers' methods and how successfully you can apply those methods in your own creative and transactional writing.

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    Overview

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    This unit focuses on the core skills of reading and writing. In the reading section, you are required to respond to unseen literary prose texts, demonstrating your ability to draw inferences, analyse language and structure, and compare writers' viewpoints. In the writing section, you must produce original creative and transactional writing that applies narrative techniques and linguistic conventions to create deliberate effects on the reader.

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    Reading Skills

    Identifying Information & Ideas

    When approaching an unseen text, your first task is to locate both explicit and implicit information. Explicit information is clearly stated on the page, whereas implicit information requires you to read between the lines. Examiners reward candidates who can draw perceptive inferences and justify their points of view using close, judiciously selected textual evidence.

    Analysing Language
    Key Language Features to Identify
    FeatureDefinitionEffect on ReaderExample
    MetaphorDescribing something by saying it is something elseCreates vivid imagery, forces the reader to see the subject in a new, often startling way'The classroom was a zoo.'
    SimileComparing two things using 'like' or 'as'Helps the reader visualise an unfamiliar concept by comparing it to a familiar one'Her smile was as bright as the sun.'
    PersonificationGiving human qualities to non-human thingsBrings the inanimate to life, often reflecting the mood of a scene or character'The wind whispered through the trees.'
    Pathetic FallacyGiving human emotions to nature/weatherEstablishes atmosphere and often foreshadows narrative events'The gloomy sky matched his somber mood.'
    AlliterationRepetition of consonant sounds at the start of wordsDraws attention to a phrase, affecting pace and tone (e.g., harsh 'c' sounds create aggression)'The cruel, cold wind cut through him.'
    SibilanceRepetition of 's' soundsCreates a hissing, whispering, or soothing auditory effect'The snake slithered silently.'
    JuxtapositionPlacing contrasting ideas side by sideHighlights differences, creating tension or emphasizing a specific trait'In the city of dreams, poverty slept on the streets.'

    Key Language Features at a Glance

    Analysing Structure

    Structural analysis is often the differentiator between mid-tier and top-tier candidates. When analysing structure, consider the journey the writer takes the reader on. Look for:

    • Openings: Are we dropped in medias res (into the middle of the action)?
    • Shifts in focus: Does the writer move from a panoramic view of a setting to a tight close-up on a character?
    • Narrative perspective: Who is telling the story, and how reliable are they?
    • Sentence length variation: Are short sentences used to build tension, followed by complex sentences for descriptive flow?
    • Paragraph structure: Does a single-sentence paragraph create a sudden, jarring impact?
    • Cyclical structure: Does the ending return to an image from the beginning, creating a sense of inevitability or entrapment?
    Evaluating Critically

    Evaluation requires you to form a judgement about how successfully a writer has achieved their aims. You must express your opinions with supporting evidence. Use the statement-evidence-analysis-link framework to ensure your evaluation is grounded in the text rather than vague personal opinion.

    PEAL Analysis Framework

    Comparing Writers' Viewpoints

    When comparing texts, you must identify the differing viewpoints, compare the methods the writers use to convey those viewpoints, and evaluate their effectiveness. Use comparison connectives such as 'similarly', 'in contrast', and 'whereas' to explicitly link the texts throughout your response.

    Comparison Framework Diagram

    Writing Skills

    Creative Writing

    Original creative writing must maintain a consistent viewpoint and be structured to create deliberate effects rather than just telling a chronological story. Apply the 'show, don't tell' principle: use sensory description to evoke mood rather than stating emotions explicitly. Employ varied sentence structures and ensure your opening is engaging and your ending is satisfying.

    Creative Writing Toolkit

    Transactional/Non-Fiction Writing

    For letters, articles, speeches, and leaflets, you must adapt your tone and register to suit the specified purpose and audience. Use the AFOREST framework to embed persuasive techniques effectively, but remember that a coherent, logical structure is just as important as individual rhetorical devices.

    Technical Accuracy (SPaG)

    Spelling, punctuation, and grammar (SPaG) constitute a significant portion of your writing marks. Use ambitious punctuation (semicolons, colons, dashes, parenthetical commas) to demonstrate control. Ensure paragraph cohesion by using appropriate discourse markers to guide the reader through your argument or narrative.

    Visual Resources

    5 diagrams and illustrations

    PEAL Analysis Framework
    PEAL Analysis Framework
    Key Language Features at a Glance
    Key Language Features at a Glance
    Creative Writing Toolkit
    Creative Writing Toolkit
    Exam Approach Flowchart
    Exam Approach Flowchart
    Comparison Framework Diagram
    Comparison Framework Diagram

    Interactive Diagrams

    2 interactive diagrams to visualise key concepts

    Conceptual Flow Outline

    Read the Question Carefully
    โž”Reading or Writing Task?
    Reading or Writing Task?
    โž”"Reading"Identify Question Type
    โž”"Writing"Identify Purpose / Audience / Form
    Identify Question Type
    โž”Language, Structure\nor Evaluation?
    Identify Purpose / Audience / Form
    โž”Plan: Hook โ†’ Middle โ†’ End
    Language, Structure\nor Evaluation?
    โž”"Language"Select Short Embedded Quotation
    โž”"Structure"Identify Structural Feature\n(opening, shift, perspective)
    โž”"Evaluation"Form Opinion + Find Evidence
    Select Short Embedded Quotation
    โž”Apply PEAL Framework
    Identify Structural Feature\n(opening, shift, perspective)
    โž”Apply PEAL Framework
    Form Opinion + Find Evidence
    โž”Apply PEAL Framework
    Apply PEAL Framework
    โž”Link Back to Question Focus
    Plan: Hook โ†’ Middle โ†’ End
    โž”Draft with Techniques\n(AFOREST / Show Don't Tell)
    Draft with Techniques\n(AFOREST / Show Don't Tell)
    โž”Proofread SPaG\n(2 minutes at end)

    English Language exam approach flowchart

    Conceptual Flow Outline

    Comparison Question
    โž”Step 1: Identify Both Writers' Viewpoints
    Step 1: Identify Both Writers' Viewpoints
    โž”Step 2: Find Evidence for Each Viewpoint
    Step 2: Find Evidence for Each Viewpoint
    โž”Step 3: Identify Language / Structural Techniques
    Step 3: Identify Language / Structural Techniques
    โž”Choose Structure
    Choose Structure
    โž”"Point-by-Point"Compare same aspect\nacross both texts\nin each paragraph
    โž”"Block Structure"Text A fully analysed\nthen Text B fully analysed\nwith explicit links
    Compare same aspect\nacross both texts\nin each paragraph
    โž”Use Comparison Connectives:\n'Similarly', 'In contrast',\n'Whereas', 'Both writers'
    Text A fully analysed\nthen Text B fully analysed\nwith explicit links
    โž”Use Comparison Connectives:\n'Similarly', 'In contrast',\n'Whereas', 'Both writers'
    Use Comparison Connectives:\n'Similarly', 'In contrast',\n'Whereas', 'Both writers'
    โž”Evaluate Effectiveness:\nWhich writer is more convincing\nand why?

    Framework for comparing writers' viewpoints

    Worked Examples

    3 worked examples โ€” open one to explore the question and available guidance.

    Practice Questions

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    Q1

    Read lines 1-5. List four things we learn about the setting.

    4 marks
    foundation

    Hint: Only look at the specified lines. Keep your answers brief. You do not need to write in full sentences.

    Q2

    How does the writer use language to describe the character's fear?

    8 marks
    standard

    Hint: Identify a technique, quote it, and explain its effect. Focus on connotations of specific words.

    Q3

    Evaluate the statement: 'The ending of the story is highly effective in creating a sense of mystery.'

    20 marks
    challenging

    Hint: Take a clear stance. Use evidence to support your view. Analyse how the writer's structural and linguistic choices create that mystery.

    Q4

    Write a story with the title 'The Discovery'.

    40 marks
    challenging

    Hint: Plan your structure. Use 'show, don't tell'. Vary your sentence lengths for impact. Ensure your SPaG is accurate.

    Q5

    Compare how the writers of Text A and Text B convey their perspectives on city life.

    16 marks
    challenging

    Hint: Identify the viewpoint in each text. Compare them explicitly using connectives. Analyse the methods each writer uses.