Pearson Edexcel · A-Level · English Literature

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    Poetry – Section B: Specified Poetry Pre- or Post-1900 – Pre-1900 –…

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    Component 3: Poetry – Section B: Specified Poetry Pre- or Post-1900 – Pre-1900 – Metaphysical Poetry – John Donne Selected Poems (Penguin Classics, 2006): A Hymn to God the Father

    John Donne’s ‘A Hymn to God the Father’ is a profound metaphysical poem exploring the speaker’s anxiety regarding original sin, personal transgression, and divine forgiveness.

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    The idea

    John Donne’s ‘A Hymn to God the Father’ is a profound metaphysical poem exploring the speaker’s anxiety regarding original sin, personal transgression, and divine forgiveness. Written late in Donne’s life, the poem employs a repetitive structure, asking God if He will forgive various categories of sin. A defining feature is the recurring pun on the poet’s own surname in the refrain ‘When thou hast done, thou hast not done’, reflecting his fear that his sins are insurmountable.

    What earns the marks

    • Analyse the use of puns, specifically on 'done' and 'Sun/Son', to convey theological anxiety and resolution.
    • Evaluate the poem's structure, noting the repetitive questioning and refrain that build a sense of accumulating sin.
    • Explore the contextual significance of Donne's religious background and his late-life anxieties about death and salvation.
    • Discuss the metaphysical conceit or wit in treating divine forgiveness as a legalistic or transactional negotiation.

    Common mistakes and how to put them right

    • Treating the pun on 'done' merely as a humorous wordplay.

      Put it right: Analyse the pun as a serious metaphysical device expressing deep spiritual anxiety and the inescapable nature of his identity as a sinner.

    • Ignoring the shift in tone in the final stanza.

      Put it right: Ensure you contrast the despair of the first two stanzas with the resolution brought by the 'Sun/Son' in the final stanza.

    • Discussing Donne's biography without linking it to the text.

      Put it right: Integrate contextual knowledge of Donne's ordination and illness directly with his poetic choices and thematic concerns.

    Exam tips

    • Focus on the interplay between the strict rhyme scheme (ABABAB) and the conversational, pleading tone of the speaker.
    • Use the pun on 'Sun' to discuss how Donne blends the physical universe with Christian theology.
    • Compare the tone of this late poem with Donne's earlier, more secular or romantic metaphysical poetry if making wider connections.

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    Have a go first

    In 'A Hymn to God the Father', which literary device does John Donne use repeatedly in the refrain "When thou hast done, thou hast not done"?

    Listen

    John Donne’s ‘A Hymn to God the Father’ is a profound metaphysical poem exploring the speaker’s anxiety regarding original sin, personal transgression, and divine forgiveness. Written late in Donne’s life, the poem employs a repetitive structure, asking God if He will forgive various categories of sin. A defining feature is the recurring pun on the poet’s own surname in the refrain ‘When thou hast done, thou hast not done’, reflecting his fear that his sins are insurmountable. A strong answer earns marks for these points. Analyse the use of puns, specifically on 'done' and 'Sun/Son', to convey theological anxiety and resolution. Evaluate the poem's structure, noting the repetitive questioning and refrain that build a sense of accumulating sin. Explore the contextual significance of Donne's religious background and his late-life anxieties about death and salvation. Discuss the metaphysical conceit or wit in treating divine forgiveness as a legalistic or transactional negotiation. A common slip: Treating the pun on 'done' merely as a humorous wordplay. Instead, Analyse the pun as a serious metaphysical device expressing deep spiritual anxiety and the inescapable nature of his identity as a sinner. Exam tip: Focus on the interplay between the strict rhyme scheme (ABABAB) and the conversational, pleading tone of the speaker.

    See it

    A top-down flowchart with seven nodes. The first node states the speaker's anxiety about original sin and personal transgression, and an arrow leads to a node on the repetitive structure of asking God to forgive categories of sin. That leads to a node on the refrain with the pun on 'done' ('When thou hast done, thou hast not done'), which leads to a node on the fear that his sins are insurmountable. An arrow then leads to a node on the final stanza's shift towards spiritual resolution, which leads to a node on the pun on 'Sun' (the Son of God), and finally to a node on the assurance of salvation.
    It shows the poem's progression from the speaker's anxiety about sin, through the repetitive questioning and the pun on 'done', to the final stanza's resolution through the pun on 'Sun/Son'.

    Put it in order

    Put these steps in the order they happen.

    1. 1. Assurance of salvation
    2. 2. Pun on 'Sun' (the Son of God)
    3. 3. Refrain with pun on 'done': 'When thou hast done, thou hast not done'
    4. 4. Final stanza: shift towards spiritual resolution
    5. 5. Speaker's anxiety: original sin and personal transgression
    6. 6. Repetitive structure: asking God to forgive categories of sin
    7. 7. Fear that his sins are insurmountable

    Key words

    Say what each word means before you turn the card.

    Sin and Salvation

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    Divine Forgiveness

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    Mortality and Fear

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    Identity and Naming

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    Sin and Salvation
    The poem explores the speaker's anxiety regarding original sin and personal transgression, and moves towards assurance of salvation in the final stanza.
    Divine Forgiveness
    The speaker asks God whether He will forgive various categories of sin, treating divine forgiveness as a legalistic or transactional negotiation.
    Mortality and Fear
    The poem reflects Donne's late-life anxieties about death and salvation, with fear that his sins are insurmountable.
    Identity and Naming
    A recurring pun on the poet's own surname in the refrain reflects his fear that his sins are insurmountable and the inescapable nature of his identity as a sinner.

    Label the diagram

    Some boxes have lost their names. Pick the right name for each number.

    The diagram again, with 3 boxes numbered instead of named. A top-down flowchart with seven nodes. The first node states the speaker's anxiety about original sin and personal transgression, and an arrow leads to a node on the repetitive structure of asking God to forgive categories of sin. That leads to a node on the refrain with the pun on 'done' ('When thou hast done, thou hast not done'), which leads to a node on the fear that his sins are insurmountable. An arrow then leads to a node on the final stanza's shift towards spiritual resolution, which leads to a node on the pun on 'Sun' (the Son of God), and finally to a node on the assurance of salvation.
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