How to Revise Writing — CCEA A-Level ESOL & Literacy
Write a structured essay in Irish on a given topic related to Irish culture, society, or literature.. Present and support arguments with evidence.
Examiner Tips for Writing
- Spend at least 5 minutes planning your essay structure: outline your thesis, key arguments, and supporting evidence before you start writing.
- Use a variety of Irish phrases to introduce, contrast, and conclude points, such as 'Is fiú a lua', 'Mar sin féin', and 'Mar fhocal scoir'.
- Incorporate short, relevant quotations from studied texts to demonstrate depth, and always explain their significance in your own words.
- Reserve 5–10 minutes for a final review, paying special attention to verb conjugations, initial mutations, and punctuation, as these can significantly impact marks.
- Before writing, analyse the task carefully to identify the required genre, audience, and purpose, and plan your response to ensure a coherent structure and consistent tone.
- Read a wide range of high-quality Irish texts in different styles to internalise authentic register and idiomatic expression; adapt your writing to suit formal and creative contexts.
- Use a rich and varied vocabulary, but ensure you are confident in the meaning and usage of less common words to avoid awkward phrasing.
- Proofread meticulously with a focus on common Irish-specific errors: check mutations, verb endings, spelling rules, and consistency in dialectal choices.
Common Mistakes in Writing
- Failing to directly address the essay question, leading to irrelevant content or a descriptive rather than analytical response.
- Using English-language structuring patterns (e.g., overuse of 'firstly, secondly') instead of natural Irish connective phrases like 'ar an gcéad dul síos' or 'ina dhiaidh sin'.
- Neglecting to proofread for common grammatical errors such as incorrect use of the genitive case, séimhiú, or urú after prepositions.
- Presenting unsupported opinions without citing evidence from texts, historical examples, or societal data, which weakens the argument.
- Writing overly long paragraphs that combine multiple points, resulting in a lack of clarity and structure.
- Relying on direct translation from English, resulting in unidiomatic phrasing and structures that sound unnatural in Irish.
Key Marking Points
- Award credit for a clear introduction that establishes the topic and presents a focused thesis statement.
- Assess whether each paragraph maintains a single, well-developed point supported by relevant examples or quotations from prescribed texts or cultural references.