Pearson Edexcel · A-Level · English Literature

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    Poetry – Section B: Specified Poetry Pre- or Post-1900 – Post-1900 – The…

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    Component 3: Poetry – Section B: Specified Poetry Pre- or Post-1900 – Post-1900 – The Movement – Philip Larkin: The Less Deceived (Faber, 2011): Coming

    Larkin’s 'Coming' offers a rare glimpse of optimism within 'The Less Deceived', focusing on the transition from winter to spring.

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    The idea

    Larkin’s 'Coming' offers a rare glimpse of optimism within 'The Less Deceived', focusing on the transition from winter to spring. The poem captures the sensory experience of longer evenings and the song of a thrush, using these natural elements to symbolise renewal and hope. Unlike his typically cynical Movement contemporaries, Larkin adopts an almost childlike perspective here, culminating in the powerful simile of a child witnessing adults reconciling. This imagery evokes a profound sense of relief and unexpected joy. By examining the shift from the descriptive opening to the emotional climax, readers can understand how Larkin balances his characteristic melancholy with fleeting moments of pure anticipation.

    What earns the marks

    • Analyse the use of sensory imagery, particularly light and sound, to establish the atmosphere of early spring.
    • Evaluate the significance of the poem's short, unrhymed lines in conveying a sense of simplicity and organic growth.
    • Explore the psychological depth of the final simile, comparing the arrival of spring to a child witnessing adult reconciliation.
    • Discuss how the poem's tone of cautious optimism contrasts with the broader scepticism typical of Larkin and The Movement.

    Common mistakes and how to put them right

    • Describing the poem as entirely joyful without noting the underlying tension.

      Put it right: Acknowledge the implicit sadness in the final simile, which relies on the prior existence of adult conflict to make the reconciliation meaningful.

    • Overlooking the poem's unusual form in the context of Larkin's work.

      Put it right: Explicitly contrast the short, unrhymed lines of 'Coming' with the strict, traditional stanzaic forms Larkin usually employs.

    • Misinterpreting the thrush as a complex mythological symbol.

      Put it right: Treat the thrush as a grounded, everyday element of the English suburban landscape, fitting The Movement's focus on the ordinary.

    Exam tips

    • Contrast the hopeful tone of 'Coming' with the bleaker outlook of other poems in the collection to demonstrate a nuanced understanding of Larkin's range.
    • Pay close attention to the enjambment and how it propels the reader forward, mimicking the inevitable arrival of the new season.
    • Use the final simile to discuss Larkin's exploration of childhood innocence versus adult experience.

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    In Philip Larkin's poem 'Coming', which phrase is used to describe the song of the thrush in the garden?

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    Larkin’s 'Coming' offers a rare glimpse of optimism within 'The Less Deceived', focusing on the transition from winter to spring. The poem captures the sensory experience of longer evenings and the song of a thrush, using these natural elements to symbolise renewal and hope. Unlike his typically cynical Movement contemporaries, Larkin adopts an almost childlike perspective here, culminating in the powerful simile of a child witnessing adults reconciling. This imagery evokes a profound sense of relief and unexpected joy. By examining the shift from the descriptive opening to the emotional climax, readers can understand how Larkin balances his characteristic melancholy with fleeting moments of pure anticipation. A strong answer earns marks for these points. Analyse the use of sensory imagery, particularly light and sound, to establish the atmosphere of early spring. Evaluate the significance of the poem's short, unrhymed lines in conveying a sense of simplicity and organic growth. Explore the psychological depth of the final simile, comparing the arrival of spring to a child witnessing adult reconciliation. Discuss how the poem's tone of cautious optimism contrasts with the broader scepticism typical of Larkin and The Movement. A common slip: Describing the poem as entirely joyful without noting the underlying tension. Instead, Acknowledge the implicit sadness in the final simile, which relies on the prior existence of adult conflict to make the reconciliation meaningful. Exam tip: Contrast the hopeful tone of 'Coming' with the bleaker outlook of other poems in the collection to demonstrate a nuanced understanding of Larkin's range.

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    A flowchart running top to bottom. It begins with a node labelled 'Descriptive opening', which leads to 'Sensory experience of longer evenings', then to 'Song of a thrush', then to 'Natural elements symbolise renewal and hope', then to 'Almost childlike perspective', then to 'Final simile: child witnessing adults reconciling', and finally to 'Relief and unexpected joy'. A separate node labelled 'Short, unrhymed lines' leads to 'Mirror the organic, unforced arrival of spring'.
    It shows the poem's movement from the descriptive opening through sensory imagery and the thrush's song to the emotional climax of the final simile, with the short, unrhymed lines mirroring spring's organic arrival.

    Key words

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    Renewal and the passage of time

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    Childhood innocence

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    Nature and the suburban landscape

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    Cautious optimism

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    Renewal and the passage of time
    The transition from winter to spring, which the poem uses to symbolise renewal and hope.
    Childhood innocence
    An almost childlike perspective, culminating in the simile of a child witnessing adults reconciling.
    Nature and the suburban landscape
    Grounded, everyday elements such as the thrush, fitting The Movement's focus on the ordinary.
    Cautious optimism
    A tone that contrasts with the broader scepticism typical of Larkin and The Movement.

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