Organising Information and Ideas

    OCR
    GCSE
    English Language

    This guide focuses on the crucial skill of organising information and ideas in OCR GCSE English Language. It covers how to structure your writing for maximum impact and how to analyse the structural choices of other writers, skills assessed in AO5 (writing) and AO2 (reading)."

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    Overview

    Organising information and ideas is a fundamental skill in English Language, impacting both how you write and how you interpret texts. For writing (AO5), it’s about creating a coherent and cohesive piece that guides the reader logically through your ideas. For reading (AO2), it’s about understanding the deliberate structural choices a writer makes to shape meaning and affect the reader. This guide will equip you with the techniques to master both.

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    Reading Skills

    Identifying Information & Ideas

    This skill requires you to read with a detective’s eye, locating both explicit (clearly stated) and implicit (suggested) information. In unseen texts, you’ll need to quickly grasp the main points and the underlying message. Look for keywords, repeated ideas, and shifts in tone to help you.

    Analysing Language

    Examiners want to see that you can identify specific language features and explain their effect on the reader. Avoid generic comments like ‘it makes the reader want to read on’. Instead, be precise about the emotion or idea the language evokes.

    Key Language Features to Identify

    FeatureDefinitionEffect on ReaderExample
    MetaphorA figure of speech in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action to which it is not literally applicable.Creates a powerful image in the reader’s mind, making an abstract concept more concrete.‘The classroom was a zoo.’
    SimileA figure of speech involving the comparison of one thing with another thing of a different kind, used to make a description more emphatic or vivid.Makes a description more vivid and relatable by drawing a comparison to something familiar.‘He was as brave as a lion.’
    Pathetic FallacyThe attribution of human feelings and responses to inanimate things or animals, especially in art and literature.Creates a strong sense of atmosphere and can foreshadow events.‘The angry clouds gathered overhead.’
    PersonificationThe attribution of a personal nature or human characteristics to something non-human, or the representation of an abstract quality in human form.Brings an object or idea to life, allowing the reader to connect with it on an emotional level.‘The wind whispered through the trees.’
    AlliterationThe occurrence of the same letter or sound at the beginning of adjacent or closely connected words.Can create a particular mood (e.g., soft sounds for a calm atmosphere, hard sounds for a sense of conflict) and makes the phrase more memorable.‘The sweet smell of success.’
    SibilanceA figure of speech in which a hissing sound is created within a group of words through the repetition of ‘s’ sounds.Can create a sense of slyness, secrecy, or peace, depending on the context.‘The snake slithered silently.’
    JuxtapositionThe fact of two things being seen or placed close together with contrasting effect.Highlights the differences between two things and can create a sense of irony or tension.‘The pristine new building stood next to the crumbling ruins.’

    Analysing Structure

    Structure is the ‘architecture’ of a text. It’s how the writer organises their ideas to take the reader on a journey. When analysing structure, consider the following:

    • Openings: How does the writer hook the reader in?
    • Shifts in focus: Where does the writer change the topic, time, or perspective?
    • Narrative perspective: Who is telling the story and how does this affect our understanding?
    • Sentence length variation: How does the writer use long and short sentences to control the pace?
    • Paragraph structure: How does the writer use paragraphs to group ideas or create emphasis?
    • Cyclical structure: Does the text end where it began? If so, why?
    • Flashback/Foreshadowing: Does the writer play with time to create suspense or provide context?

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    Evaluating Critically

    This is a higher-level skill that requires you to form your own opinion on a text and support it with evidence. A good structure for an evaluative paragraph is:

    1. Statement: State your opinion clearly.
    2. Evidence: Use a short, embedded quotation to support your point.
    3. Analysis: Explain how your evidence proves your statement.
    4. Link: Link your point back to the overall question.

    Comparing Writers' Viewpoints

    For comparison questions, you need to identify the similarities and differences between two texts. A good approach is to:

    1. Identify viewpoints: What is each writer’s opinion on the topic?
    2. Compare methods: How do they use language and structure to present their views?
    3. Evaluate effectiveness: Which writer is more successful in conveying their message and why?

    Writing Skills

    Creative Writing

    Whether you’re writing a story or a description, the key is to engage your reader’s imagination. Here are some techniques to help you:

    • Show, don’t tell: Instead of saying a character is angry, describe their clenched fists and gritted teeth.
    • Sensory description: Appeal to all five senses to create a vivid and immersive world.
    • Varied sentence structures: Use a mix of long, complex sentences and short, simple sentences to create a dynamic pace.
    • Engaging openings: Start with a bang to hook your reader from the first line.
    • Satisfying endings: Leave your reader with a lasting impression.
    • One-scene rule: For short stories, it’s often best to focus on a single, significant event.

    Transactional/Non-Fiction Writing

    For letters, articles, speeches, and leaflets, you need to have a clear purpose, form, and audience in mind. The AFOREST acronym can help you remember persuasive techniques:

    • Alliteration
    • Facts
    • Opinions
    • Rhetorical questions
    • Emotive language
    • Statistics
    • Three (rule of)

    Technical Accuracy (SPaG)

    Spelling, punctuation, and grammar are worth a significant number of marks in the writing paper. To impress the examiner, try to use ambitious punctuation like semicolons, colons, dashes, and parenthetical commas. Also, pay close attention to your paragraphing and use of discourse markers to create a cohesive and fluent piece of writing.

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    Worked Examples

    3 detailed examples with solutions and examiner commentary

    Practice Questions

    Test your understanding — click to reveal model answers

    Q1

    Identify two ways the writer uses language to describe the setting in the opening paragraph.

    2 marks
    foundation

    Hint: Look for specific word choices or simple figurative language.

    Q2

    Explain how the writer uses sentence structures to create a sense of excitement.

    4 marks
    standard

    Hint: Look for a mix of long and short sentences. How does this affect the pace of the writing?

    Q3

    Write a description of a busy market.

    24 marks
    standard

    Hint: Use sensory details to bring the scene to life. Think about what you can see, hear, smell, taste, and touch.

    Q4

    Evaluate how successfully the writer creates a sense of mystery.

    12 marks
    challenging

    Hint: Form your own judgement and support it with evidence. Consider what the writer does well and what could be improved.

    Q5

    Compare how the writers of Text A and Text B present their ideas about technology.

    16 marks
    challenging

    Hint: Identify the viewpoint of each writer and then compare the language and structural choices they make to persuade the reader.

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